Saturday, 5 December 2009

NaiveGate!?!




In our enlightened time
is time our lacking prime
we miss colourful nuances,
indicators in the wave dance
and become castaway
and lost, far, far away


Have a Lovely Weekend,

Anna-Lys




14 comments:

Mariana Soffer said...

I loved that small poem or haiku.I like it cause I found it completelly coherent and contraditory at the same time, how can during enlightment one become cast away? makes sense and not.

Cheers!

RuneE said...

I'll take the lighthouse and gain some time among the waves in my bathtub - reading science history.

Ain't I dull?

imac said...

Love the befudling poem,
The (light my fire Lighthouse) piece of art is wonderful.

Little Lamb said...

Interesting structure.

dianne said...

That is an unusual lighthouse, very surreal but I like its prominence in the painting with the lovely colours in the sky as its backdrop.

So too your poem, we are supposed to be enlightened but we are sometimes so busy we lack the ability to notice the small things and the feelings which make us whom we are and then we lose ourselves. ♡

foam said...

sometimes i wonder if our 'enlightened times' are an illusion. i always love your nuances, anna-lys .. :)

you have a great weekend.

TROLL Y2K said...

I'm misunderstood, so I guess I'm in good company. The lighthouse is clever.

Charles Gramlich said...

Great poem and pic! Have a good weekend yourself.

/t. said...

beautiful post!

thanks, anna-lys <3
&
have a womderful weekend!

× × ×

/t.

ANNA-LYS said...

Mariana
Thank You!
Life itself has multifaceted meanings and mirrors many levels, I just tried to catch a bit of it ;-)


Rune
Don't You got a Rubber-Duck? ;-)

ANNA-LYS said...

Rune
Efter nogrann anna-lys; No, Yo ant dull!

Imac
LOL @ "befudling" ;-)

ANNA-LYS said...

Little Lamb
LOL my word-paint
or the Lighthouse?


Dianne
Yepp, unusual, indeed!
Thanks for Your lovely interpretation of my word-painting!

ANNA-LYS said...

Foam
I am inclined to agree upon that it must be an illusion, coz the more I know, the more I realize that I do not no nothing, at all :-D


Troll
Hope its not a repeated pattern ;-)
Can You develop the story about the clever Lighthouse, it sounds interesting.

ANNA-LYS said...

Charles
Thank You, but to call it "poem" its to much, lets stay with word-painting :-)


/t.
Thank You! <3